Tuesday, September 19, 2006

Dropping Names?

Tom,

I’m hoping you or your readers could offer some insight on this situation. One of my friends is a recent graduate of Syracuse’s MFA program, which happens to be my top choice. Should I mention in my personal statement that one reason I’m so excited about Syracuse is because I know [insert friend’s name here] and she had a very positive experience? I’m well aware I won’t be selected just because I dropped the name of a recent grad, but this is a legitimate reason for why I favor the school. I just don’t want to come across as someone who thinks she can get in based on who she knows versus how she writes.

Thanks,
Obsessing Over Personal Statement (OOPS)

------------

Oops, I'd include the person's name. It's part of your story of "Why I want to attend Syracuse." As long as you're reasonable about it. As long as you don't write, "I know you accepted Stacey, and I'm an even better writer than her!" or the like. :)

If I were on the committee, I'd actually like to know this information. Rock on.

5 comments:

aliyaa said...

When you start doing the creative activities then you surely have to passed through the good writing with the different purpose statement. This is one of the best way through which you can write more things in easy way personal statement example

Unknown said...

A neat and handy citation generator will do the trick, and supply the required facilitate. Have a glance around ANd choose the generator that you just like and learn to use it in an economical manner. In the end,  reference page generator

Anonymous said...

As those that have the education and also the information so they'll be able to work with the most recent technology that they'll use for the event of their country. case study apa format

Anonymous said...

This article is all about the Kellan life and how he selects their occupation. It is very difficult to select their working field with write a letter readmission to college and maybe it happens that you select completely the different field. This is an amazing article to read and it is so enjoyable.

online sentence rephraser said...

I think there is no harm in mentioning the name of a person who had a good experience. But first permission must be demanded. Seems like you are very excited when posting this this blog.